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Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
0 posted 2005-11-22 01:53 PM

Last day of my life
I am going to be grown
have children of my own

I will take my kids
up to the mountains
show them how high they can go
What a beautiful site
it can show

They would be so happy
for I am their mother
they are my special ones
I love no other

Being with them
is my life
I would rather be with them
then have lonely times

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura
© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-11-22 02:17 PM

This is lovely and heart warming Laura.
Challenge well met.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~
Sharksbean
Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
2 posted 2005-11-22 03:37 PM

this is very touching Laura i love it love you

-may the force be with you in poetry
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