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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
I see this night so clearly still September's rain was falling down With thunder crashing all around Climbing the stairs into our realm Lying beside you, i lost myself Listening to the sound, that was the rain High on lust, to just experience Leaving you I don't turn around and with no spoken word I'm running down the stairs to dance in the rain Jumping in puddles, was somehow in vain I was soaked, my feet were wet, I shiver Laughing at myself,......I fell so hard |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
Rain reminds me of myself in ways. It's not often I read anything or hear anything I can relate to. This poem may be short but it's a good one. May the winds sweep through the moonless sky.... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sounds like a good night to stay in...and enjoy. You have talent. TD |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Climbing the stairs into our realm Lying beside you, i lost myself Listening to the sound, that was the rain High on lust, to just experience Leaving you ~awesome poem ... wolfy~ |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
This needed saying for guys who often wonder and never think nor realise Excellent Dave |
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