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Open Poetry #36

Dirt to Dust

Lotta Lagg
Junior Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 19
Michigan

0 posted 2006-01-04 11:02 PM

Dirt to Dust

Beneath the dirt we lie to dust
Ecstasy will lift my soul adjust
Encounter my substance that I suppress
Beneath the dirt my body a mess
My soul shall fulfill eternity abound
While my body below decade the ground
Psyche I’m free
Anatomy never to be
~

"One Oneness One"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-01-05 12:01 PM

You stir mixed feelings with this one, dear Lotta.

The desire of the soul to fly high, beyond the earthly limits is innate, I think, in us humans.

On the other hand the body is our actual means of visibility and to imagine it in dust isn't fun.

Well written piece.

Love,
Margherita

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2006-01-05 03:58 PM

I'm not sure what to make of this one... I like the contrast you've got here, it works very well

Thanks for the read!

and then He created the horse...

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