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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2006-01-05 11:51 AM


And then
Slowly  Suddenly
Into what was silence—

A sadness

Softly
Stirs
© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2006-01-05 12:03 PM

I can feel this one intensely.

Bravo!

Love,
Margherita
DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
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Pennsylvania
2 posted 2006-01-05 01:38 PM

I like this one a lot. I read a lot of your work.. and never know what to say. It's very short, but can stir up so much emotion, I really enjoy it. Thank you
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
3 posted 2006-01-05 02:34 PM


Thanks to the both of you.
It's nice to know that my things are being
read.

Thanks again.

John
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