| Open Poetry #36 |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA
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Lucid on the doorstep I knew with the sky and as my eyes searched it I did not. The spiders theives of wings had trailed cobwebs over my eyes like a silent steal of doubt I was without and minds eye held me in unearthly shades of skies that do not exist upon the plane of sight and nod of science. And yet there I was, gorged and alone divine knowing everything as if I were dead, just returning. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
And yet there I was, gorged and alone divine ye shan't ever be alone, and divine, you always were and will be.. |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i need to read this one a few times again , it has a haunt to it that is interesting another cool writing gems ~J |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"knowing everything as if I were dead, just returning" Ohhhhhhh love that!!! ![]() "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
a rebirth . . . beautiful. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thanks you lot. The best dream i have ever, and will probably ever have. I wish i could write it how it felt, but i could never do it justice. |
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