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What Lays ahead
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What Lays ahead |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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seeing you once again remembering from back then as we progress through this mudane thing we call life I'm glad I finally got your attention this time. the sparkle in your eyes the laughter on your face makes me sail off into a ever so special place. pain is all ive known my tears have been shed to the point where they just bled. as you came into the house of cards i put up you knock them all down and i finally surrender to what may lie ahead Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I like the idea of the house of cards being knocked down. This is a good read. You have managed to capture the sentiment and express it well. Bravo! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ 'once again remembering' ... and in the remembering ... may you find a good memory to keep for the all-of-time~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wonderful read. It expresses many things. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i agree with froggy , what a great read , we all have been in similar situations but you have put a touch of grace into the mix , well done  ~James |
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