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Open Poetry #36

Melted

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-03 04:39 PM

Your mind was a journey estranged, mixed in a journey betwix

That no longer melted your dreams of reality

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-07-03 05:39 PM

hmmm...I like it

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-07-04 06:51 AM

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

3 posted 2005-07-05 12:05 PM

*Nudge*

People pay attention this is great... short but well formed... Great write

"And the sun went down, and the stars came out far over the summer sea,
But never a moment ceased the fight of the one and the fifty-three."

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2005-07-05 12:16 PM

cute

_Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

5 posted 2005-07-05 12:19 PM

I enjoyed this read.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-07-05 12:31 PM

Your words sure got my melted mind to thinking! lol

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