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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-07-27 01:16 PM



Where once young men
Came to the door—
When all was summer

An old woman
The small gray house
With yellow flowers

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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-07-27 02:07 PM

Your words describe the house perfectly..
and one can imagine the old lady within.
Well done!

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2005-07-27 02:38 PM

Beautiful!

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art
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