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Open Poetry #37

Smooth as Wool

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2006-02-14 11:04 AM

What words could I write
That would flow to you just right
And not seem contrived,
Not overly used,
Poetically abused,
Or so shows how hard I strived.

Might not the words fall
So you couldn't tell at all,
I formed them to fit.
Do they feel like silk or wool,
Do they have a pull,
Or am I just writing ...

Gloom

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-02-14 11:12 AM

almost as if this were penned to music...lovely

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2006-02-14 11:14 AM

Thank you, Lee
You are very kind
As always

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-02-14 11:30 AM

wonderful write, Proff. Much enjoyed

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2006-02-14 04:19 PM

loved the end rhyme
and make mine silk, please

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