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Open Poetry #37
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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
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0 posted 2006-03-24 01:31 AM

When the barroom growls.
that the drinks are gone... now!

and the t.v. man
with his voice in a pan

sings anthrax,

with a score!
Let all the flags wave.
at  God in his grave?

then....


I'll be done drinking...

and
follow some  wobbly cock out the door.
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Kathy
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1 posted 2006-03-24 02:10 AM

Behave yourself girl.

(Nice Write)

Kathy
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-03-24 05:02 AM

whew! reminds me of some closing times of my own...good write
icebox
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in the shadows
3 posted 2006-03-27 09:43 AM

At that point, men mostly are interchangeable; never settle for the wobbly ones.  *smile*

strong imagery. thanks for sharing!
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-03-27 03:05 PM

LOL at icebox reply.
Best to leave alone, leave the wobblies behind.
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