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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-04-23 11:46 AM

As I Write This Today

I shall not be missed
You would act unaware
Silently I am leaving
Without a fanfare

Into forgotten oblivion
Here I cannot be found
I shall tip toe quietly
Not make a sound

Before I say goodbye
Perhaps I can mention
I do not write for pity
Nor for attention

I once did have hope
If your memory recalls
As I write this today
A silent tear falls

I wish you happiness
Mine came to the end
I will grieve in silence
Signed your friend

Hope©2006
Link to the poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8326492.html

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-04-23 12:45 PM

Hope~
You are such an excellent writer ...
Don't know how you do it ...
But glad you do~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2006-04-23 01:00 PM

Marge , Thank you for the kind compliment , I was just trying to get some hurt out of my system here

Hope

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2006-04-23 02:55 PM

Enjoyed the read, Hope. I grieve too but I know it will end once the will to forget wakes up from what can sometimes be a long sleep.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-04-23 03:04 PM

I have someone I could send this to, but now it's pointless to even talk anymore

sending you

mariae
Member

since 2006-04-24

Posts 54
Denmark, Europe

5 posted 2006-04-24 04:37 PM

A feeling we just get every now and then. Great one
Why is it that we have so much to write about when we are feeling down??

miabug
Member

since 2006-04-19

Posts 59
Canada

6 posted 2006-04-24 05:49 PM

mariae
Because when we are happy we want the feeling to last forever. We do not try to remove it from our mind and soul.
When we hurt, we want the feeling to go away and we try to get rid of it by every possible mean.
Does that make any sence?

Hope
Beautiful poem. I can feel your pain and I am sending good thoughts your way.
Thanks for sharing
Mia

Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C.

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