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Open Poetry #37

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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2006-04-24 06:57 PM

You holding me, me holding you
I thought if I closed my eyes
It would last forever that night

I left later wanting to stay
but I needed to go on home
We all have places we belong
I was afraid it wasn't you

Still am

-Juju

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poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

1 posted 2006-04-24 07:36 PM

Life and its merits,

nice words, and thoughts to remember

although sad in parting, as to what could have been

a poet who cares

mariae
Member

since 2006-04-24

Posts 54
Denmark, Europe

2 posted 2006-04-25 04:25 AM

The feeling of never to belong in a place we really want to...scary.
Good short one :-)

Maria

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2006-04-25 07:01 AM

Touching moments to cherish

Hope

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