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Open Poetry #37
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2006-04-30 01:16 PM


Trim

whisper to me
before the dawn
so I can wear
your words
all day

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart
© Copyright 2006 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
shirtless
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since 2006-04-29
Posts 359
1 posted 2006-04-30 01:25 PM

smooth and concise
howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678
2 posted 2006-04-30 02:52 PM

shh...........let's not wake up the kids

good poem  
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-04-30 04:04 PM

love it...so good to be reading you, Helen

M
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-04-30 04:19 PM


Nicely done and the words fit you so well.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2006-04-30 04:27 PM

nothing like a comfy warm suit to make you feel good all day long
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