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Open Poetry #37

In Life’s Yearning Moments

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-05-11 10:48 PM

seeking illusions

only still hearts can manage

death holds its meanings

©2006 by icebox
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BROTHER JOHN
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since 2006-04-06

Posts 386

1 posted 2006-05-11 11:08 PM

Thanks Icebox!

I guess the greatest illusion to most is they will not die.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2006-05-12 03:15 AM

Well said, Mr. Icy!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-05-12 03:16 AM

yep

good one

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2006-05-12 10:05 AM

I'm yearning for a still heart.

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

5 posted 2006-05-12 10:20 AM

Very nice. Short and to the point!

RIch

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

6 posted 2006-05-12 12:49 PM

Let illusions be
for those afraid of life.
Death begat us all.

s.a.g.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

7 posted 2006-05-12 01:24 PM

Because life has ceased to penetrate?

Dave

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-05-12 05:29 PM

Outstanding! That's all.

themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

9 posted 2006-05-12 06:19 PM

arthur grey that isn't the appropriate synonym count for a hiku. icy this is a wonderfully done hiku.

FNG
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since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

10 posted 2006-05-12 11:35 PM

powerful write!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2006-05-15 07:54 AM

Most of don't even realize.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16

Posts 112

12 posted 2006-05-16 10:49 PM

illusions truthened
still hearts still hold much meaning
death is victory!

great job!

picturegramic

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