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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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As if making up For lost time All the snow Rushing down |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Your poetry is so frugal and simple it entrances me John. You cut life down to its bare bones. Beautiful work. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Agree with The Lady. It's not just the images you create, it's the way of thinking behind the images. - Owl |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
making up for lost time...it all gets lost eventually somewhere... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent imagery! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This poem made me think.... which is a good thing. Hugs, Ethel |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this world does need be cleaned deligently. beautiful poem. |
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