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Open Poetry #37
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2006-01-27 12:17 PM


No preacher
Teacher
Or how to do manual
Could have made her

It is only natural
That she should glide into a store
And leave it more than it was before her

That even now
With the sun gone down
Below the horizon line
Still a glow limns the silent air

And what was less
In common nature
Should be lifted to the heart
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playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02
Posts 362
Neverland
1 posted 2006-01-27 01:07 AM

"No preacher
Teacher
Or how to do manual
Could have made her

It is only natural
That she should glide into a store
And leave it more than it was before her"

loved this. You add line breaks brilliantly.
my compliments. xxxx

farewell the ash-tray girl
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-01-29 12:31 PM



Delicious.


Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-23 01:50 PM

I wonder how you write icecream store.

beautiful, truly.
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