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Four Under Twenty
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Four Under Twenty |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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just a few thoughts... 1 heartened words depressed wanting to be sprung but only upon you 2 faint visions of memory clinging to the outside dressed to be shared by one 3 time written on my hands fingertip touches that read your soul 4 my eyes see the whispers from lips that weave words that reach into my heart to fill M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M, you delight this reader with 4 for the price of one! Each one is a piece of emotive perfection. You have surely done MVS proud!   EA |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
the one word that comes to mind from these thoughts? .... BEAT ... and the beat goes on ... *S ct |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you both, sometimes little thoughts are all that come to mind~~ M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 these really are great M! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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