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Open Poetry #38

An Orange Fantasy

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-06-19 12:54 PM

           the heart of the issue

is that i've cried in too many tissues

without telling you i miss you

and i'd never intentionally wish you

           any emotional harm

but my over-exuberance at manufacturing charm

has pretty much assured us

that i'll never walk on your farm

                       again

unless you're willing to grab my arm one day as a friend

and if you do, i promise i'll never bring alarm

into those pretty bright eyes of yours

without you, i'm like a crushed used up can of Coors

                      broken

                                                 love,

                                                 howard

Walter_Mitty_Esq
Junior Member

since 2006-06-01

Posts 21

1 posted 2006-06-19 01:00 PM

"without you, i'm like a crushed used up can of Coors".

Strikes a chord with me, Howard. I wish I could write that five months ago.

Thank you for giving words to what I felt!

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