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Open Poetry #38

Borrowed Emotions

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2006-07-03 10:28 PM

I draw my emotions
From deep within – you
You, him, her
All who surround me
Your smile is mine
Your tears are mine
But envy is mine
And mine alone
I envy what you feel
I feed off your emotions
Just to survive
To feel
To be human
Everything more beautiful
More vivid
A simple sunset
The sound of rain
Even if just for a brief moment
I’m alive
Because of you
I draw my emotions
From deep within – You
You, Him, Her
All Who Surround Me
And I Envy You
And What You Feel
While I’m Left Here
With Borrowed Emotions

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2006-07-04 02:04 AM

Good write but so sad. martyjo

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2006-07-04 10:22 AM

I liked it alot.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-07-04 10:43 AM

I hope this is an empathetic write

Well writ!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2006-07-05 05:55 AM

Borrowed Emotions....love the title and feelings ...

well done!

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-07-05 07:30 PM

Enjoyed...James

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