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Open Poetry #38
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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
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0 posted 2006-07-17 12:51 PM

Sometimes people leave us,
so we remember they were here.
So we can analyze,
and criticize,
and finalize,
and eulogize.
© Copyright 2006 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-07-17 09:32 PM

I'll take three out of four of those...

but I imagine one would get all four
nevertheless.

Well done, Tina.
TinaTrivett
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2 posted 2006-07-17 09:41 PM

Thanks for the nice comment sunshine. I was sure this one was lost down the page for good...lol.
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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3 posted 2006-07-17 11:35 PM

I read this early this morning, but had no time to tell you how much I like it.  I like it a lot.  You know, I have really enjoyed all the poems you post.  May I be President of your fan club?  Huh?  Huh?

aziza
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Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 2006-07-17 11:50 PM


Tina, if it had gotten lost I would have gone searching for it. Love it.

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