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Open Poetry #38
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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
0 posted 2006-07-28 11:52 PM

Attention

Are you what you seem, I wonder
really what you seem?
Will you be that way tomorrow
or be different?
Is your laughter really real
do you really, really care
or is it just a game you play for attention?

aziza
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elisalie16
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since 2006-07-12
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1 posted 2006-07-29 02:15 AM

aziza you capture and describe human behavior very well
TinaTrivett
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2 posted 2006-07-29 12:31 PM

Nice write aziza.
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