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Open Poetry #38
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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
0 posted 2006-08-01 11:55 AM


Polished orderly
efficiently equipped
accompanies lame patient
as if he were going to dance
if only he felt human limitations
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Artofmark
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since 2006-07-12
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1 posted 2006-08-01 12:08 PM

This is an intresting poem, I like the meaning.
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