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Open Poetry #38
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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-08-08 10:31 AM


   Under overhangs
Beneath layers of paper
The wasps and winos
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1 posted 2006-08-08 10:43 AM

XO, with an economy of words, you managed to pull several emotions out of me!

Clever, and highly effective, use of juxtaposition.

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2 posted 2006-08-08 10:54 AM

Uriah,
juxtaposition exposed, well done.
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