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Open Poetry #38

Ascended Iris (tanka)

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-05-26 11:42 AM

    In bloom and in bud
  Fruition and its promise
     Beautiful flowers
  A blossom flys to heaven
    Magnificent butterfly

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-05-26 11:51 AM

Larry

Reminds me of song I used to sing with my preschool class

"I saw a butterfly, like a flower flutter by.
Why are they called butterflies, seems the should be flutterbys"

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

2 posted 2006-05-26 11:55 AM

::smiles:: a flutterby ah I love it! So very...POOHish LOL I love it!
Thank you (((Martie)))

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-05-26 01:25 PM

How absolutely lovely!
Butterfly hugs~

Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-05-26 04:39 PM

You splashed in my ink
With poetic line of think
Snapshot photo of
Butterflies in flutterbye
How beautifully they flit~

Tanka YOU once more for the inspire ...

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2006-05-27 09:52 AM

B E A U T I F U L!
This butterfly lover loves this!!

It's a keeper

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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