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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-08-18 05:06 AM


          It is so funny
Whenever you say "my" mind
      As if you owned one
   Like it was a possession
When the "you" belongs to Mind

             *

         It is so funny
Only form can be possessed
  Where is "your" mind at?
As if Mind were an "object"
  The object is funny "you"

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© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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1 posted 2006-08-18 10:33 AM

I enjoyed BOTH form and content!!!!

Regards,
INclan
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-18 10:36 AM

Tanka you for this work
Enjoyed!
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2006-08-18 12:35 PM

Point taken.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
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