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High Tide |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
that night you came to me - I was parched and gritty; you smoothed me, and caressed me, effacing all remains of abandoned sandcastles at sunrise you withdrew, leaving salty tears behind CG |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this so reminded me of Marc Anthoney's song "you sang to me" enjoyed but bittersweet |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Beautiful! "effacing all remains of abandoned sandcastles" |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Just lovely. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you for reading and replying. CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A little piece of poetic perfection!   EA |
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