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The Bite of Love
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The Bite of Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: The Bite of Love I wallow in a hollow bowl The clamor wears my very soul This cry in fly that drains me pale Has harpoon struck my heart in wail? The echoes spin a seamless web A tide that never seems to ebb A sight that haunts my dreams at night This song a whale might sing in flight There is no way that I can say I would it were another way To hold her hand and say I’m there To dull her pain, at least to share I kiss her on the cheek each day To ask forgiveness in a way I do not think she understands Each kisses bit of contraband I sorrow she will never know This love I have and cannot show |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As good as the original, Sy.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe she understands...  lovely Sy...lovely |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Superb write, my friend  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...you touched my morning. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love.  LeeJ I hope so. Interloper Thank you my friend. Martie As you did mine. |
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