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Open Poetry #38
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0 posted 2006-05-29 04:51 AM

I lay on the ground
wind surrounds

Eyes closed
Spirit flow

Into the fluffy whites
I saw with my spirit
I touch with my soul
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with you
1 posted 2006-05-29 12:42 PM

I want a day like this...
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on cloud 9
2 posted 2006-05-29 07:36 PM

first time on,really liked your poem,a pleasure to read it.


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3 posted 2006-05-31 02:54 AM

thanks guys, for dropping in
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