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Open Poetry #38

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howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-05-30 12:22 PM

can you give me a "Sunday Kind of Love"?

        one that helps us rise above

the fact that so far, my attraction

to you has only been a small fraction

of what it takes to inspire you to take the action

that could possibly give us the most satisfaction

                  of our lifetimes

                                           love,

                                           howard

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

1 posted 2006-05-31 05:00 PM

Whoever that's written to must have goosebumps. I love the idea of "Sunday kind of love." Who wouldn't?? Thanks for sharing yourself. Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-05-31 06:27 PM

Not really Liz

It is like someone who want's to grow young and relieve and releave

It is about dreaming

And your first man

Or a first love

And I can relate to this

Dave

ben_huckle
New Member

since 2006-05-30

Posts 7

3 posted 2006-05-31 06:47 PM

very good, really liked the opening 2 lines, thumbs up

Ben

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