| Open Poetry #38 |
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Heaven Knows |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Heaven Knows I had to say goodbye to you. Heaven knows I never wanted to but you left me alone, cut off your phone put me in a position of no hope & futility. Not even a woman that I love can do that to me. JamesLee May15 2006 I was mad when I wrote this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep I feel the anger here hopefully it has passed now |
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Magnus![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice Read JM. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I feel your anger in this poem, and also a sense of sadness. It's good. aziza |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It is easy to sense your anger in this piece James. How about a hug? ![]() Nancy. For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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