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Open Poetry #38

let's be lovers who ...

shirtless
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since 2006-04-29

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0 posted 2006-06-05 11:11 AM

let's be lovers
who part
like the continents
fingers stretching
to kiss beneath the sea

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2006-06-05 11:28 AM

Oh, yes! ~ beneath where there is more going on than meets the eye!

Geo-magnetism!

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

2 posted 2006-06-05 01:20 PM

Eclectic and electric write. So very not cliche. I like the msytique.
~klassy

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2006-06-05 06:32 PM

as islands are drawn to me now

it took me so long to swim on an ocean field

wallowing in ideas
struggling in prose

Good one

Dave

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2006-06-05 09:45 PM

LOVE this! One of your shortest poems and yet, there is still so much intensity. The imagery is powerful, unique.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-06-05 10:10 PM

All of the above
bring your poem
to the fore...

let it clash, indeed.

Well done, Sir.

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