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Open Poetry #38

Breaking over you

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-06-08 01:01 PM

This is one of the few times
I don’t know what to do
I know that it seems silly,
But I’m breaking over you
I want to know what to do
So I can make this right
I know that it seems silly
But I can’t sleep at night
I'd do anything to get back
The litte friendship that we had
But I don't know what to do
I think I'm going mad
I wish someone could tell me
Exactly what to do
Because I know that it seems silly
But I'm breaking over you

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2006-06-08 01:35 PM

Honesty is never "silly" ... nicely done.
Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

2 posted 2006-06-08 01:37 PM

I liked the recurring "I know it seems silly"

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