| Open Poetry #38 |
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As I Embraced Every Note |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia
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As I Embraced Every Note In whispering thoughts Fingers played magically Through the night he sang Love enchanted harmony My heart began to soar Upon his serenade I float Loving words I caressed As I embrace every note Over each musical chord Upon his guitar he strums Dreams lovingly attuned The night sensually hums Notes sang to my heart With the sweetest refrain Tender touches I beckon Come and play me again Fingers gliding blissfully Played in rhythms I adore I lingered on the feelings While I await the encore Hope©2006 Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8334178.html |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful, perfect flow, especially enjoyed the last stanza ![]() Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree with Honeybee. Great write!! JL ![]() |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Hope The nice thing for me is that on every read I see something Dave |
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