| Open Poetry #38 |
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Reason Tells Me Nothing |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows
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hot strawberry moon raging weaving sleepless dreams shines without mercy ©2006 by icebox |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mr. C., after reading the poem, I found myself wanting to continue the title with..."that I don't already know." The doc is probably right. ....jo |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
I like it. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
"hot strawberry moon" delicious and lovely all at once! A very nice haiku. |
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skyshine![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Made me think of a hot, humid summer night, with tortured thoughts running through the mind....well done! ![]() ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one once again |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Some nights are absolutely relentless.... Very succinct and well written images tug at my spirit. ~ Klassy |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Because there are no answers. Love your stuff! martyjo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox.....yep, I like this! ![]() Moon or no...nights without sleep preclude reason. I've had no moon, only light rain at night...but still can't sleep. |
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