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Open Poetry #39
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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-10-17 03:39 PM


I brought forth a thought
And then claiming it as Mine
I brought forth an I
Born in each clinging moment
Seven times today, eight now.
© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2006-10-17 03:46 PM

Hi Larry...Unique baby...congrats!
XOx Uriah xOX
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2 posted 2006-10-17 03:49 PM

haha   thank you   (((Martie)))
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-10-17 11:42 PM


pretty unique poem too
enjoyed it...
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-10-17 11:46 PM

~ and the eigth one is a charm!

Loving Light,

EA
AltairVonCreed
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5 posted 2006-10-18 01:55 AM

I rather enjoyed the unique structure and wording of this piece. Very well done.
Honeybunch
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6 posted 2006-10-18 04:05 AM

Sometimes the bringing forth of an "I" is as a result of a long hard struggle.  Enjoyed your ... birth!  
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