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Open Poetry #39
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LukeatNFFC
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since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England
0 posted 2006-11-16 06:43 PM

Rain, Rain,
Falling from the Sky,
A sullen expression of darkness
As the clouds slowly die.

Rain, Rain,
Falling to the ground,
Much maligned and misintepreted,
As water cycles, around.
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-11-16 11:22 PM

Around, indeed..with no where to go
upon asphalt....

long ago Paul Harvey said, (sic) "and where does the rain go upon black topped ground"

where, indeed?
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