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Open Poetry #39

Eternity Took Haste

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2006-12-18 01:33 AM

Just as a withered love will die,
Every love will surely part,
Not with the grace of times gone by,
But with the ceasing of the heart.

I only wished an eternal love,
For eternity… took haste,
Every love - we will forever love,
Rapidly passes and comes to waste.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-18 03:25 AM

love can last forever my sweet Bill

enjoyed RDB

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-12-18 08:03 AM

I know the feeling Bill

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

3 posted 2006-12-18 09:04 AM

This made my heart ache.

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