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Open Poetry #39

Ringing Out The Old

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-12-31 06:43 PM

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The ship’s clock
Will strike twelve bells

And out in a field
Of new snow
Across the road

I will see my father
Again like a little boy

Shooting his shotgun
Into the air

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-12-31 10:27 PM

Great imagery!
Very much enjoyed!
Happy New Year!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-12-31 10:34 PM

The memories
that lead one forward

are the most
treasured.

Thank you, John.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

3 posted 2006-12-31 11:48 PM

Brings back memories of me and my dad 2. Thanks for stirring the imagination

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-24 03:13 PM

what a warm memory in the cold field.
searching the lost sound in the quiet snow.
father, the love and strength
forever live with our soul.

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