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Open Poetry #39

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2007-01-06 02:27 AM

I recognize myself in scores
of chalkdust
and the need for more
written in the whimsical
I never needed anything
and need is something
I deplore
actuality absorbed
like I were a thing ignored
in the difference:

batting atchoo eyelashes
biting at my bottom lip
dancing as I was supposed
to be a certain kinda chick--
as if it made a difference
as if there was an attitude
of some suspense
in
all of this--

as if it was
all pure nonsense

bobbing like you were the one
spinning like a crochet thread
you pulled me like a bobbin
and
I felt my feet lift from the floor

beautiful

as I ignored
the simple silly jealousies
of every girl
and every boy
dancing as I loved you more--

sample simon
dancing scored

"To Sir"

(to sir)

with love

with love

you know that I will love you more

forever and today

and more

dripping down the tear...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2007-01-06 02:44 AM

Loved this title by the way

to ya lady. This brought back an old ache for me too.
bobbing like you were the one
spinning like a crochet thread
you pulled me like a bobbin
and
I felt my feet lift from the floor

beautiful

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-01-06 03:03 AM

just wonderful Karen

Happy New Year!
RDB

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