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Open Poetry #39

to get away

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-09-18 02:32 PM

walked into the woods,
far from the nearest town;
the trail overgrown
and obscure -

when a likeness of mine
appeared,
trudging toward me -
polite smiles,
a nod,
“nice day for a walk”...

though I am sure
we both thought
where the hell
must one go
to get away...

CG

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2006-09-18 04:28 PM

Wow I liked the concept.

Keep it up

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* Juju *
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marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2006-09-19 11:02 PM

interesting piece....I visualized that walk and can associate with it..

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