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Open Poetry #39
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MukkaKukka
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0 posted 2006-10-03 06:48 AM


Insects cover the evening Sun over a lake.

The bravest dance over the water.

St.Vitus, Amok, the fry, eagerly leap.

A girl comes, sits by the lake, eyes fixed on the scene.

Boat cuts through the stage,

Incision in the calm skin.

A boy rows, steers towards shore.

They walk up a hill,

Together,

Silent.
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-03 07:25 AM

this is beautiful

thanks for sharing
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2 posted 2006-10-03 06:43 PM

nice setting
liked the incision line
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