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Teen Poetry #9

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Kim
Junior Member

since 2010-03-20

Posts 10
U.K.

0 posted 2010-03-20 05:07 PM

Surrounded.
I sit in a room,
crowded.
I am alone.

They talk,
they laugh,
they shout,
unaware.

I give a silent scream.
Help.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2010-03-20 05:34 PM

Man do I know how that feels. I like the simplicity of this. Nice job.

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2010-03-21 01:30 PM

Kim,
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your poem, I think this is an excellent first post
Krysti

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