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Open Poetry #47

sunset of love

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2011-07-19 04:48 PM

Eager for todays unravel
of solitary magical events
the ocean and sky become one
where the sun meets in the middle
waiting for it to disappear..
Into the night with a whisper
theres love in the air tonight....

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-07-19 07:39 PM

Love. A four-letter word that is on the nice side of the boundaries of taste. Love should be in the air each and every night.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2011-07-21 10:21 PM

Very nice...a poem of visuals as well as invisibles..things that happen in the dark, after sundown..

The title threw me off a little, I thought that it was about a love that was dieing, perhaps like the days light..but I see that it is not.:-)
enjoyed

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