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Meguro Stone Bridge |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The white snow Falls from a dark sky The slender river Winds its blue way Under Meguro Bridge Who is she In a brown kimono A paper umbrella Over her head That old woman Once so beautiful For whom A young man Very much in love Wrote his poems . |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
A beautiful poem, very visual. I felt like I could see her. The Meguro Bridge is one of many in Japan and your poem makes me want to visit it. Marcia www.thewritingforum.net |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent poetry, as is always, yours. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wonderful imagery and magical day dreaming, John. Ida |
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