The Past Year - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #2

The Past Year

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

0 posted 2000-01-04 10:25 PM

Reflecting the past year.
Now the time as come.
Journey in the new year,
Be proud of what I've done.
I've prayed, dreamed, and wished,
Some have come true.
I have written some poems
Then read some of everyone else’s too.
My fourth year of writing.
This year almost done.
Made a big move,
Made some new friends too.
Have enjoyed everyone.
So now for this past year
I know I shall be proud
I started my writing strong
Then met a good crowd
They all dream and wish
Just as I always do.
So to all my new friends
I do hope yours come true
I have cried many times
Wrote down crying tears
But I hope we stay friends
For many, many more years.

[This message has been edited by Jer (edited 01-05-2000).]

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

1 posted 2000-01-07 01:14 AM

beautiful

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 2000-01-07 01:46 AM

Lovely. Very much so.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

peanogrl83
Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

3 posted 2000-01-07 05:39 PM

Jer, another great poem! Conveys emotion quite effectively! :.)
Vreni

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

4 posted 2000-01-08 12:43 PM

Thank you everyone for the all the great comments. They mean more then you think.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.