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The thorn that sits upon my crown...
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The thorn that sits upon my crown... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
so im cynical and im never looking up nor down and superficial was the thorn that sat upon my crown.. and crazy wounded memories can be my friend my love..the ugliness within |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Short poem...but powerfully short  . Good work...keep it up! --Lavada "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
jackal: powerful piece (despite the brevity)... i can honestly say i used to be very cynical myself (more of a misanthrope actually) and i can identify well... i do hope, however, that the bitterness does not last... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Very good!! Nothing worng with a short poem and don't know why people even mention that it's short. I like poems like yours they have simple idea and are very clear!!! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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abra-cadabra Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75Florissant, Missouri, USA |
Good poem. Straight and to the point. Cool! |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Very good poem. Very powerful!! |
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