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gidget7 Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 52Arkansas, USA |
A Father of great power and influence below none looked upon creation of His beloved son. As He gazed upon His little boy... who now had become Man His heart leaped with joy as He saw Him boldly stand He remembered days gone by when people cried out His name A tear fell from the sky, when He healed the sick and the lame. The pride swelled within His soul when His little boy called out a man, who had been dead, just three days ago and now could breathe, talk, and stand. His son, loved so deeply by some, they would give their life for Him. But others hated the work he had done. They tried to call it sin. This proud Father, with love so deep watched His child suffer death, as they hung Him on the cross for all to see, The Father brought His son to rest so very proud of His creation. For in death, His son offered the world, Eternal Salvation! [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
gidget, This one got by me and I am so sorry, for your message should be shouted from the roof tops! Amen. I praise our Father with love and jubilation for giving unto us Jesus, our salvation! A sweet heart of love for our Saviour could only penn this tribute to God. Bless you much gidget. Love, Marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Gidget; You have said all that needs be said and you have written it so powerfully and with beauty. Thank you. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Got by me too, thank you Marcy for sending this one back up. Gidget what a beautiful job you have done with this, the Father so proud of His Son as He gave eternal salvation. Bonnie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is really good, thanks for sharing the poem! A Father of great power and influence below none looked upon creation of His beloved son |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I'm glad they're moving them over here! Wouldn't want to miss these! You've got some great writing here! I edited it for you, so let me know if I did this correctly. If not I can always go back in and change it  |
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gidget7 Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 52Arkansas, USA |
Thank you White Dove,you did a fine job of editing it.And Thank you to everyone who has said such very nice things about my poems.I have seen many on here that are much much better than the ones I have written.Hopefully,one day my writing will be better than this and I can truely glorify God in the manner in which He deserves I can put the words together ok, but I must humble myself and say that I am not so good at the punctuation part of it.Guess I slept through class that day. Again,all of you have been very kind and encouraging to me, and you are truely appreciated for that.God Bless you all. |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
Gidget, This is very good. I enjoyed the threads of thought in there. Maybe some of those threads you could even pick up later and weave another beautiful psalm/ poem. . .not to say that this poem is incomplete at all, it just had some richness in there that can be drawn upon. I know I did! Thanks for sharing. I encourage you to keep writing. As I like yourself desire to honor the Lord with my pen. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 I love the perspective from which you wrote this poem as reflecting on some very emotional reflections from a proud Father's view of a very special Son... Touching. Bob <>< |
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