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Allstaria22
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2001-11-07 10:15 PM

standing
sitting
staring in to space
laughing at a joke
or screaming out my rage
You are there

too many times
not looking for Your face
never noticing Your tears
for my sin
for my shame

too many lies
told in vain
untaken chances
to share the wonder that is You

I remember how I was
so dark and hurtfull
full of nothing but hate
and fear

remind me again
how it should be
how it was ment to be
between us
and patiently wait
for me to return.

Isaiah 1:18

"Everybody loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" -All Together Seperate

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

1 posted 2001-11-08 08:37 AM

Dana, oh sweetie, yes sometimes we are full of fear and hate and sometimes that fear and hate is instilled in us by someone else but you know what? God is greater than all fear and his love can remove anything that was thrown at us, put into us, comes from us, and we can really shine and you did with this one. Bless you.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

2 posted 2001-11-08 09:58 AM

Dana; This was beautifully written. It shows hurt in the background. But, God can help us to overcome all that. It takes time, but with God's grace that can happen. You have a beautiful talent, and have expressed yourself so well in this poem. God bless. Wanda

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2001-11-08 02:43 PM

I connect with this one completely. I wrestle with the same problem. Very nice poem.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-11-10 10:21 PM

It's good you know that God is there whatever the circumstance, full of love for you. Joyce

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2001-11-11 07:49 AM

standing
sitting
staring in to space
laughing at a joke
or screaming out my rage
You are there

You have said it all.
Welcome to PIP.

Melton

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-11-12 11:21 PM

Very emotional read! Even when we are angry at Him, He loves us and waits for us to realize it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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