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When A River Bends
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When A River Bends |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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In silent motion and constant flow forward in notion a river shall grow So peaceful, tranquil 'til comes a rise the ground finds fill and the bottom lies Direction so ends another churn when a river bends causing life to turn create an addiction .... share a smile!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Bravo!!!This is so totally cool! I think it is one of your best, Craig. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thanks KC I have been on a "boat ride" lately ... amazing how one can get here from there! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, this is a BRAVO!!! the rhythm and feel of this captures the flow of a river bending to and fro just as life enoyed! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CTOwen~ Love the title ... Enjoyed the way you worked the rhyme~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, I just love how this poem "winds" and "cascades", I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love the feel of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is spectacular, CT... full of vivid imagery... and very flowing... just like that river... ~ a river of hugs and grinsLyra |
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