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Open Poetry #27

To Be the Moon

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-06-30 01:27 PM

To Be the Moon

as long as there is Light
there shall be shadows

yet, may I be as the moon
in full reflect
rather
than cast the shadows
of eclipse

©June 30, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-06-30 02:48 PM

enjoyed the thoughts in this one

Don't I get to enjoy the aspects of both, as the midnitesun?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-30 03:05 PM

Enjoyed...James

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-06-30 03:50 PM

Great write

Tima C

She
Junior Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 41
Wishing On A Northern Star

4 posted 2003-07-01 03:27 AM

Found a treasure..
loved this

"You put a stain on all of my good days."
Matchbox Twenty "Disease"

Cruina
Junior Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 16
Virginia

5 posted 2003-07-01 04:01 AM

I do not see her as a reflector, but more of a harnessor of light. The poem is good in that you said a lot in a few words, i enjoyed it. It was an interesting perspective.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-01 04:02 AM

shadows are a sign of light

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2003-07-01 04:03 AM

Great thoughts.. enjoyed very much.

Maree

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